tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post7036646967327213200..comments2019-06-08T09:46:59.041+10:00Comments on The Mystery I Cannot Charge Right Now: I ACHED FOR HIMMatthew John Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09692136501131270216noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-77969364703297317832012-06-22T18:57:19.026+10:002012-06-22T18:57:19.026+10:00Have just been reading my way through a good hit o...Have just been reading my way through a good hit of your work and this one... this one keeps pulling me back.Graham Nunnhttp://www.anotherlostshark.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-46404621754742383032012-06-03T18:43:37.210+10:002012-06-03T18:43:37.210+10:00Succinctly potentSuccinctly potentRob San Miguelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13165340391347834129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-76070456622607800652012-05-29T03:00:33.364+10:002012-05-29T03:00:33.364+10:00Beautifully written. I could see the man and woman...Beautifully written. I could see the man and woman in my mind, with their all too human shortcomings. And the lines "I broke for Him/ I ached for her/ I ached for Him" packed such a punch. It also was interesting that Him was capitalized, while her was not. It made me wonder if there was a greater "Him" that your were breaking for.Tracy Crenshawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10118044404594498000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-56115425654000767552012-05-21T07:13:41.815+10:002012-05-21T07:13:41.815+10:00I enjoyed this. (Checking you out :))Very nice.I enjoyed this. (Checking you out :))Very nice.Don Yortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885579613643065582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-41702173597749162132012-05-20T07:29:18.650+10:002012-05-20T07:29:18.650+10:00this reads so well - the hymn-like refrain, the sh...this reads so well - the hymn-like refrain, the short lines.<br /><br />and between the lines, between "business and causality", in the nexus between christian faith and the reality it en-genders: in these spaces you've made room for worlds...bruce dorlovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01006724431838559504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2597604025893871310.post-15699637155143170822012-05-19T02:21:58.397+10:002012-05-19T02:21:58.397+10:00"Coitus longitude", what an idea! For me..."Coitus longitude", what an idea! For me it reads like the eternal fight between seduction and purity.Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17564210453026152076noreply@blogger.com