Matthew John Davies
she looks so brave and strong... nice play of words....nice to meet you ~
you have made her real.
I especially like "rippled face upon face". I can see them!
Oh, I bet she is a force to be reckoned with! Great imagery in this!
I enjoyed your words and this playful view~
The intensity of this piece is nearly overwhelming. You created a powerful poem, here, Matthew.http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/05/26/all-you-got/
Strong poem, Matthew. You've captured Jeanne' strangeness - many writers domesticate her.