Monday, 2 January 2012

SPLASH

 

splashed
with the truth’s
glistening
I want you back
like a straight line






(First appeared in Cottonmouth, Issue 29, August 2011).
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 January 2012 at 17:59

    Cool, straight to the point.

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  2. Martin7 January 2012 at 23:07

    "You can close your eyes to the things you do not want to see, but you cannot close your heart to the things you do not want to feel."
    Maybe it's this kind of truth.

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  3. Anonymous20 January 2012 at 13:12

    I agree with Mark - spot on, not a word out of place, such a great poem

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