Sunday, 1 April 2012

HALF-MOON IS ENOUGH

half-moon is enough
to submit my senses
twitch my feet back
into hellfire and bat
a spec of brimstone
away from the fore

but our humanity
is never enough to
inherit the mammon
poured into our ears
as we need to know
who or what does tilt
the invisible vessel
and why they lied
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8 comments:

  1. Abin Chakraborty2 April 2012 at 04:47

    this one packs a punch.esp lines 7-10.bravo!

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  2. hyperCRYPTICal2 April 2012 at 09:04

    Superb!

    Anna :o]

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  3. Anonymous3 April 2012 at 18:00

    Great work, Matt, you're throwing out the questions and forcing the reader to think - love it.

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  4. Unknown3 April 2012 at 20:43

    I really like this. It hovered just out of reach. The perfect place for a poem :)

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  5. Brother Ollie4 April 2012 at 00:07

    cool poem - dig the flow.

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  6. Anonymous5 April 2012 at 20:36

    Super dig.

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  7. Graham Nunn12 April 2012 at 11:27

    this is tight Matt,

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  8. Dick Jones25 April 2012 at 15:57

    I'm always up for a stylish moon poem!

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