don’t
be disappointed
by
the lady’s inevitability
no
point is ever unseen
they’re
all so airy thin
but
you want to offer
a
business card, limb
just
in case of grace
they’ll
curl-up to sleep
with
their dresses attached
for
drinks under the doona
So long as the awaken from that sleep...
ReplyDeleteabsolutely love the airy-ness of this Matt!
ReplyDeleteIndeed, a business card must be offered by a gentleman! She might awaken and wish to know who she was with..before she slept.
ReplyDeleteJust in case of grace... I loved the wistfulness of your poem.
ReplyDeletebusiness card, limb - that sure works lad - solid piece!
ReplyDeletethe ironic cynical tone is just fab.great to be back after a long time.and thanks for the comments :)
ReplyDeleteI like the unobvious quality to your work...allows the reader to wander into their own thoughts, awesome!
ReplyDeleteYou have a unique voice in your writing...no worries about the typos as I make them too ~
ReplyDeleteHave a great week ~