Matthew John Davies
cryptic as ever...the surreal twist in the last line keeps us asking for more.
nice one - it progresses so welltight writing MJD
Who's to blame,the Gold-digger or the Bastard?
Oooh! I love this image. You seem to have gathered up so much and delivered poetry that wastes not a single word.. but how much there is to understand in the final line!
I like your style.
Fantastic, love this one - what a closing line too, great poem!
Oh, fuck yes. This is gold, MJD.
Oh, fuck yes. This is a little sliver of gold, MJD :)
And I've just realised that I've repeated myself - arghhhhhh :D